Jumat, 05 Oktober 2012

A Fragment : Sea and Sentences


#Beep.....beep.....beep....


Wish you are here to see some cute dolphins swimming around me ....  

Take a dolphin picture for me...... Would you? Please?

I won’t !  I’ll keep this beauty for myself ....

Evil! How can you do that to me...??

You  know me. That’s my bad habit.... Take it or leave it.
           
You’re really an evil, you know!  Arrgghh......!!!

#silent

Well, did you have a good sleep last night?  Sleeping in the middle of the sea...... Around the waves and breeze .... How romantic.....

No.  I was fully awake till dawn. Chatting, drinking, singing. But no dancing and smoking.

It's not good for your health. Be careful.
And what did you drink? Lemon tea? Hahaha.....

Me? Good and healthy wine.
By the way, did you read my last articles?
Predictable, isn’t it? Seemed I also get trapped with my own style like you.

Yup....... I've read it.
You get some good ideas..... Just a little idea... But you can write it in a very serious articles.
But I realize then, I lost my breath while I read your sentences. It’s too long..... I think you can cut your sentence into  two or three  sentences using  "kata penghubung"
Just a slight critic....Sorry....

No prob. I just want to kill few peoples....

Do you mean, kill me? Hey.... You've already kill me without your articles.... No need long sentences to kill me once more.  I’ve ......     


#Beeeeeeepppp.......  #lost connection

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